Thanks for the feedback everyone.  To save space on replying, I won't reply
to each post, but thanks to Frank, Lasse, and John.

All the shots were done with a K1000, so I can adjust aperture as needed.  I
just bought an ME Super also, but I think that I can adjust aperture with
that too.

I understand about how the background is distracting from the dancers.  I
have to say that I really love the background and the crowd details and I
think that it's important to me to capture that this is a public performance
and that people are reacting to what's going on.  But I guess I'm not sure
how to capture that and still maintain enough detail in the foreground to
keep what is happening clear.

It seems like the shots work better the larger they are.  Is that the mark
of a total beginer?

I'm definitely going to go back and shoot some more film because I think I'm
learning a lot and it's a lot of fun, so I'll try to use all the advice.  I
may try standing on a pillar there and shooting from above and see how that
goes.  It's a difficult situation, because it's taking place in a little pit
in the middle of a traffic island (kind of like a very miniature apitheatre)
and it's totally surrounded by spectators so it's pretty hard to get an
uncomplicated background.

Again, thanks everyone for the feedback.  I'm on vacation, so it's taken me
a while to get back to you.

Paul

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Hi, Paul,

I don't disagree with anything Lasse said.  I, too
found that while the dancers in the foreground were
caught doing interesting things, the people in the
background distracted from that.

You could crop, but even then, you'll still get the
odd foot or hand or whatever in the background that
one may find distracting.  Cropping what you presented
to us would help immensely, but even better, think of
a few things for next time (not that you'll go shoot
street dancers again tomorrow, but you know what I
mean, generally, next time you're in a similar
situation).

Try to keep the background as uncluttered as possible.
 Given what Lasse and I said, that's a given.

Another idea may be to try different angles, like
shooting from different elevations, so that you're
looking down, and get more pavement in the background.

It may be absolutely impossible to shoot without
getting spectators in the background, as they may be
surrounding performers in a circle.  In that case,
consider opening up the aperture a bit.  Or, a lot.
Try shooting as wide as your lens will go.  That way
you should get the background spectators out of focus
due to the narrower depth of field (DOF).  Sharp
subject with blurry background can be very effective
in separating a subject from an objectionable or
uninteresting background.

HTH.

BTW, welcome aboard!!

cheers,
frank


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