Sorry to be late, I just found out that my mail never made it to the PUG but
here it comes:
- and probably not plain test - I am working on it....

Bill Gekas: Wife with Fritz the Cat

I like this picture very much. Both of your "victims" look attentive into
the camera, the angle is nice, coming from a bit below. The cat doesn't seem
upset only curious. The two are forming a diagonal line across the frame, so
the composition is good as well. I wonder though whether it would improve the
pic further if the head of your wife where complete ;-).

Fairy: EyeSpy 
Hmm I am bit of two minds here. When I saw the pic first I couldn't make
head or tail of it. I needed the comment to understand it. But once I understood
I liked the sharpness and the structure of the fur. The eye is of course the
"eye catcher" here ;-). I wonder what your dog thought at this moment
though....

William Johnson: Melancholy Reflection
I like the composition. The girl out of center and the dark, calm water
behing here. It transports the melancholy quite nicely. I experimented a bit and
cropped the people in the background and IMHO this would improve it. It gets
a more panoramic outlook, but the "uncalm" things in the background won't
disturb the calm mood of the foreground.

Timo Hartikainen: A Glance
Cute. I understand the look, (the big cheek is a bit in the way), but I like
the overall composition. The outstreched arm gives it a bit of action and a
diagonal. I miss the mother though. You have to add her in the mind smiling
her down on him....

So a bit short, but I hope it helps.
All the best
Adelheid

   

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