In a message dated 1/5/2005 12:55:47 PM Pacific Standard Time,
[EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:
<http://webaperture.com/gallery/photos/53435>

Somehow, it just lacks the impact I felt while standing there. I tried
so hard to get the contrast between this large face, and the people
inside.... Finally, just the other day, my wife saw the photo, and
said... "The face is too small. You need to crop it."

<http://webaperture.com/gallery/photos/53462>

Definitely an improvement, but still I feel I missed an excellent
opportunity. I don't know what I may have done wrong, or maybe, this
just wasn't meant to be. When you mentioned "worrying" an image to
death, Ann, I couldn't help but think of this...

Any advice? comments? Complaints? ;-) TIA
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The crop is better. But I think you cropped it a tad too tight. Now it sort
of looks chopped off on the bottom.

Maybe if you had laid down on the floor? :-)

Marnie aka Doe

I think Marnie might be on to something. My first thought was that the face should fill the door opening. Also, maybe doing a second shot exposing the face less to darken it and sandwiching or photoshopping the two images together might work.

Butch




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