I really liked this a lot in color. But B&W is even better! I love over-exposed, under-developed look. I'll agree with Frank, it does have a 50s feel to it.
William Robb suggested a darker sky. I don't know crap about Photochop, but can you simulate a medium yellow filter. Just might give it a little more warmth. -- Scott Loveless http://www.twosixteen.com