On 5/18/05, Shel Belinkoff <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > http://home.earthlink.net/~scbelinkoff/bikewaiting.html > > I was about to round file this one, but decided to post it here to see what > the experts thought of it. It's just a rough "work print." Comments and > crits welcome. >
Generally, I like it, but there's something missing here for me. I can't quite put my finger on it, but I feel that it could be a ~really~ good pic with some tweaking. Maybe the bike's too far to the left? Or, to put it another way, maybe if there was a bit more "air" to the left of the bike (if that's possible)? I really like the perspective, the wall's converging lines - very effective. I just think it all needs a bit more "oomph", but I'm at a loss to say what that oomph might be. cheers, frank -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson
