In a message dated 8/17/2005 11:54:32 PM Pacific Standard Time, [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes: Came across this picture today, taken a few weeks ago in San Francisco, while I was looking for the set I'll bring to the Slide Slam on Friday. It's a little different from what I've been working on lately:
http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW5/32p.htm Comments, critique, flames ... all appreciated. enjoy Godfrey ========== This, for me, could be vastly improved. (Okay, I finally figured out what you are doing re threads, subject line, labeling.) I'd like it better: closer, not cropped as much at the bottom, and less on the top, or more on the top, like it is, if the sky was more interesting. Right now it looks sort of out of balance, crammed to the bottom of the photograph, with a lot of not very interesting sky. It's an interesting subject with interesting lighting, I just think it could be captured in a more interesting way. HTH, Marnie
