OS 10.3.9, 550 MHz Powerbook, Safari, Airport (not Extreme) link to RoadRunner.

Everything looks good, seems to function well with the except of no sound on the "typing" on the opening page. But the speed of the characters "typing" is good - slow enough to be seen but fast enough that it is done and out of the way before I could start to get impatient.

One detail to check on - on a couple of the target words (i.e., links to other pages) I had to click around a bit to hit a hotspot. Might want to have your daughter expand the target area a bit larger than the words themselves, maybe with a transparent overlay image that is the actual on-mouse-click target...

I do wonder about our use of what is obviously copyrighted material. Your creations, but they must have been copyrighted by others? Your target audience will understand the industry practice in this regard, but do you need to include a copyright usage disclaimer of some sort?

Impressive work.

Stan

On Apr 2, 2006, at 7:53 AM, Paul Stenquist wrote:

I'm hoping to take advantage of those on the list who know much more about html and web design than do I. (Which means just about everone:-). My daughter made a website for my advertising portfolio. I'm hoping to show it to some headhunters next week, but I'm not sure if it works on PC browsers, etc. I already know that the opening frame sound effect (a typewriter of sorts) doesn't work on my version of Safari, although it does work on Explorer. The mpg commercials and jpg print ads seem to open on both browsers. I'd appreciate any feedback in regard to the way it works and anything that doesn't seem to work. Design comments are okay as well, although my daughter did it for free, so the price was right :-). I will eventually assign a new url, buti t's here for now:
http://www.stenquist.com/Paul/Paul.htm


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