Whilst it's definitely cleaner, I think the problem with this picture is that the idea (the No Entry sign beside the door to God's house) isn't supported by a suitably interesting visual image.

I should be inclined to re-shoot at a different time of day when the sun does its magic. At present, everything is flat and lifeless.

John

On Thu, 06 Apr 2006 03:58:43 +0100, Scott Loveless <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

I gave myself a do-over.  No crop, gave it a bit more contrast, and
played with the highlights and shadows.

http://twosixteen.com/gallery/index.php?id=288

Thanks again to everyone who took the time to look at the first one.

On 4/4/06, Scott Loveless <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Taken with the Spotmatic shortly after getting it back in working
order.  Heavily cropped.  I would be interested to hear your
criticisms of the composition.  HP5+, HC-110.

http://twosixteen.com/gallery/index.php?id=286

Thanks for looking!

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