Hello Shel,

Thanks for the tips - I'll take a stab at this and see if I can
improve it along the lines you and others have suggested.  I
appreciate your looking and ideas.

-- 
Bruce


Thursday, June 15, 2006, 11:08:16 AM, you wrote:

SB> Hi Bruce ...

SB> First, it's a great capture - the look on the pitcher's face is great.
SB> However, this one loses impact in the details.  The slight tilt to the
SB> fence can easily be corrected as Paul suggests, and I think it would help
SB> the presentation.  A little softer OOF area in the background would also
SB> help, as would bringing down the brightest area on the trousers and the
SB> pitcher's arm.  My biggest complaint is that the pic looks washed out -
SB> lack of contrast.  That's easily corrected, but I'd not necessarily adjust
SB> the contrast throughout the frame - work on the main subject a bit so he'll
SB> pop a little more.  Then you'll have a "big league" image <LOL>  Here's a
SB> Q&D touchup I just fiddled with a bit.

SB> http://home.earthlink.net/~ebay-pics/giants_0112_stdadj.jpg

SB> Shel



>> [Original Message]
>> From: Bruce Dayton 

>> Little league pitching.
>> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/giants_0112.htm
>>
>> Comments welcome
>>






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