That light patch on the top right coming down near the fountain really
commands my attention.  It makes it so that I have trouble really
picking out the subject.  I suspect the white sloppy border makes this
feel even worse.  This one doesn't work for me.

-- 
Bruce


Wednesday, March 28, 2007, 5:08:48 AM, you wrote:

PM> Hi,

PM> I spent an afternoon in some private gardens at Mt Wilson recently.  On
PM> the way out I found this old fountain and grabbed a couple of so-so,
PM> blurry snaps.  My excuse is it was dark in there, the light was waning,
PM> and I on 2 knee trying to focus, hold everything still and not topple over.

PM> I was sitting here tonight thinking I might as well toss them out, when
PM> I decided to make the one half-decent shot look as old as the fountain.
PM> I sorta like the end result, but I'd welcome constructive criticism.
PM> Here it is:

PM> http://www.pbase.com/petergly/image/76297420

PM> Thanks!

PM> Peter in Western Sydney





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