Godfrey, When I just looked at the image, the first what caught my eye was the out-of-focus back of the chair in front. It was "too big" in the image, not allowing to concentrate on anything in the image. This effect maybe because this object is close to the 1/3 vertical line. Presence of the well-in-focus chair and bag right behind it makes this disturbing impression stronger.
I suspect that cutting some 100 pixels (on 794x614) on the left would get rid of this dominance, while keeping the out-of-focus object in the photo. (the cut line would cut out about 1/2 of the area of the bright part of the bag on the chair behind, going slightly right of the vertical window frame, or maybe through that window frame.) Igor Fri Aug 10 15:25:57 EDT 2007 Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: lol ... yes, I'm working on this set and there are a *lot* of exposures to go through... :-) http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/33f.htm Comments and critique always appreciated. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
