Boris, The composition works for me, but the people are too small. I like the leaves, then the grass, then the people in the shade with the diagonal. Any chances to get a cleaner background behind them? Regards, Bob S.
On 10/13/07, Boris Liberman <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Hi! > > I am behind the PAW schedule yet another time. So here are few shots I'd > like to show you: > > "A Couple": http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=19197&full=1 > "In the gardens": http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=19198&full=1 > > I am specifically interested in the C&C about the second picture. It is > a bit of a compositional study for me and I'd like to know if it works. > > Thanks. > > Boris > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
