I like it against black. Makes for a dramatic shot, and the shadow detail isn't 
critical for this type of image. However, I would crop out some of the 
background at top. Perhaps half.
Paul
 -------------- Original message ----------------------
From: Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> I'm in agreement too.  It is very nicely done, but could be improved
> even more with this suggestion.  It doesn't have to be lots lighter,
> just enough to stop the blending.
> 
> This macro thing is working pretty well for you.  Keep it up!
> 
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> Best regards,
> Bruce
> 
> 
> Monday, February 11, 2008, 7:37:38 PM, you wrote:
> 
> CA> Rick:  I agree with JCO below.  Composition is very nice though.  Cheers,
> CA> Christine
> 
> 
> CA> ----- Original Message ----- 
> CA> From: "J. C. O'Connell" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
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> CA> Sent: Monday, February 11, 2008 9:01 PM
> CA> Subject: RE: PESO: Macro flute
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> 
> >>I like the composition but the shadow area of the
> >> instrument are blending with the background, I would
> >> try a lighter background to alleviate that problem.
> >> It's worst at the top valve.
> >> jco
> >>
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of
> >> Rick
> >> Womer
> >> Sent: Monday, February 11, 2008 9:55 PM
> >> To: pdml@pdml.net
> >> Subject: PESO: Macro flute
> >>
> >>
> >> My wife plays the flute, and it is a beautiful
> >> instrument to look at as well as to hear.  I "played
> >> it" photographically.
> >>
> >> http://photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=6941246&size=lg
> >>
> >> K10D, FA 50/2.8 macro, ISO 400, f/16 @ 1/45, RAW via
> >> LR.  the flute was resting on a clean, pressed dark
> >> blue dinner napkin, and lit by a fluorescent light box
> >> covered with a couple of layers of tissue paper.
> >>
> >> Rick
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
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