Ann: I agree with you about the left crop. A tighter crop on the left makes the frame feel cramped, though I do appreciate the validity of Godfrey's suggestion. But the right side is pretty tight, and she's looking to the left, & a tighter left crop chops off the graffiti making the left side feel unfinished to me. Godfrey's right about the repetition of twos. The sign of the two people images between the two "couples" is fantastic. Sounds like it was a really great assignment--must have been tons of fun. Also, I have had a quick look-around on your site; the bw poultry shop photo is a great favorite of mine.
Great work here, Ann. Big cheers, Christine ----- Original Message ----- From: "ann sanfedele" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: > >>Nice Ann! I like it a lot. Perhaps a little crop off the left end >>dead space might tighten it up a touch. I like the repetition of twos >>and the differences between the twos. It's unfortunate that the left- >>most subject moved so much, but what the heck? :-) >> >>Good stuff! >> >>Godfrey >> > Thanks, Godders! > > > the photographer was moving too :) the "left most" was my main subject > for the gig... I totally lucked out > with the entire scenario... it was rush hour! Shalley wanted a picture > of them on a subway. Click. that was it. > I disagree about the crop - I think I need that much space to the left... > > later, > ann > >> >> >> > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
