I totally get "Alone". Maybe cropping it proportionately to enhance the presence of the red blossom? Galia's "Waterlily" is well composed while the pads and leaf are somewhat past their prime, is a worthy effort. Her "Do Not Pick" is sort of "ragged", if I may. "Flies Beware" has too much background for me. I do like your "Water Droplets" if somewhat indistinct.
Jack --- On Tue, 4/28/09, Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com> wrote: > From: Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com> > Subject: Galia and Boris PESO #14 > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <pdml@pdml.net> > Date: Tuesday, April 28, 2009, 5:11 AM > Hi! > > From now on whenever opportunity permits, I shall publish > photos that Galia made along with those of mine. > > http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2009/04/peso-2009-014.html > > Please be brutal and honest. > > Thanks. > > Boris (and Galia) > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
