Well, all the elements are there and I can see what you are trying to do. I guess one issue is what is the subject - the wave or the surfer? As it stands they seem to compete a bit. If it is the wave, then the surfer needs to be less dominant - almost out of frame or upper right corner or something. If it is the surfer then he is leading my eyes out of the frame. He is 3/4s out of the frame and on his way out. He needs to be much further to the left side of frame.
-- Bruce Tuesday, June 15, 2010, 5:52:50 AM, you wrote: BW> I was trying for a very simple composition here. It's sort of what I BW> wanted but not sure if it quite works: BW> http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1370864/PESO/slides/_IGP7062.html BW> I cropped some off the top and left. K200D and 55-300 mm zoom. BW> Comments welcome. BW> Cheers BW> Brian BW> ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ BW> Brian Walters BW> Western Sydney Australia BW> http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/ BW> -- BW> -- BW> http://www.fastmail.fm - One of many happy users: BW> http://www.fastmail.fm/docs/quotes.html -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
