On Fri, 30 Jul 2010 09:47 -0500, "Christine Aguila" <cagu...@earthlink.net> wrote: > Hi Everyone: Just a bit of play with long exposures here. This skyline > view is looking south from Montrose Harbor. Tried to save the 2nd shot > with > a playful rendering, which might not be to everyone's taste, but > hey--have > at it. If you don't like it, feel free to say so. Not a problem. > > http://www.caguila.com/caguila/montroseharbor/ >
I like colours in the first one but I agree with Jack that it might be better as a panorama. There just seems to be too much blank water in the foreground despite the reflected light path. I wasn't sure about the second one but after several viewings I find that I really like it. The symmetrical composition and high key rendering works well. I might be tempted to crop it slightly at the bottom. No. 3 also works well. The bright colour of the shirt and the low contrast background focuses attention to the foreground particularly well. The last one is my least favoured. I don't think the blurred shape on the horizon helps. It's more of a distraction. Overall, an enjoyable and interesting set of images. Cheers Brian ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Brian Walters Western Sydney Australia http://members.westnet.com.au/brianwal/SL/ -- -- http://www.fastmail.fm - A fast, anti-spam email service. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.