Thanks, P.J.

I see what you're getting at there. I guess it's just me, but I find the dusty coating on the rocks grating -- almost as unattractive as the mud itself in this context. I probably wouldn't mind it as much if it were a toad or snake. But, for some reason, when I look at the butterfly, and then see the rocks around it, my eyes say, "Get off those dirty rocks, butterfly! What's the matter with you?"

And I thought about doing a tighter crop, but I'm trying to get into the habit of minimizing my cropping -- partially to reinforce the idea of filling the frame as much as possible, and partly for purposes of entering contests or uploading to stock photo sites where there may be a minimum resolution and/or a prohibition on re-sized images.

But, I do take your point, and appreciate the input. I do agree that your crop does look better, so I'll give it a whirl in another rendition.

Thanks again,

Walt


On 10/4/2010 5:11 PM, P. J. Alling wrote:
You didn't really have to do a partial desaturated, the rocks were pretty monochrome to begin with. I think it would have benefited from a bit of lightning in the wings to try to bring out some detail, and a slightly different crop.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1604247/PESO/temp/IMGP0122%28mycrop%29.jpg

Now you have the original so you could do a much better job than I did. When I attempted to decrease contrast and lighten the butterflies wings all I managed to do is put a halo around it's antennae, but the crop took away most of the mud...

On 10/4/2010 5:02 PM, Walter Gilbert wrote:
  Again, thanks for the kind words, Frank.

And, yes ... partial desaturation is a kind of gimmicky thing. But, just for the sake of comparison, here's a link to the shot before the desaturation. It was overall a pretty homely background, not befitting of the poor butterfly who happened to land upon it:

http://picasaweb.google.com/lh/photo/j6NWB_5UK2iFiEVZcyYPng?feat=directlink

A creature that lovely shouldn't be photographed on muddy rocks ... unless she happens to be a fashion model.

;-)

-- Walt

On 10/4/2010 3:12 PM, frank theriault wrote:
On Sun, Oct 3, 2010 at 10:47 PM, Walter Gilbert<ldott...@gmail.com> wrote:
  Hi all,

OK ... my last PESO for the weekend. This one is a shot from the day after
I bought my K-x, taken on a trek to a nearby wildlife preserve.  This
butterfly followed me around all day -- I guess it was attracted to the color of my shirt, or my shampoo, or my sense of humor -- Idunno. But, I
managed to get several shots of it, this one being the best:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/walt_gilbert/5049770866/#/
K-x, DAL 50-200mm, f/9, ISO 400, 1/400, Program mode

I desaturated everything except blue and cyan -- and kicked those up a few
notches for dramatic effect.

Comments, critiques, and free samples of non-perishable goods are heartily
encouraged.
I'm not much for partial desaturation.  I find it gimmicky and it
detracts from a photo.

But that's just me.

Still, I attempt to put my prejudices aside, and I have to say it's a
very good photo!  Having had a hand at attempting to photograph
butterflies recently, I know they're not an easy catch.

cheers,
frank







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