I agree with Frank here, and regarding the cropping I think I would have let the church have more room on the left, because that is where the light is coming from. I also believe that more empty space around the church, especially in the left, would increase a feeling of being lost and forgotten...
DagT http://www.thrane.name Den 22. nov. 2010 kl. 20.50 skrev frank theriault: > On Mon, Nov 22, 2010 at 2:44 PM, Daniel J. Matyola <danmaty...@gmail.com> > wrote: >> Thanks, Frank. As explained in my response to Ted, I realize it is a >> poor scan, and I am hoping to improve on it. Do you have any other >> suggestions, assuming I find the negative and and get a good scan of >> it? > > I'm not very good at suggestions, but I'd certainly want to get the > church off-centre. My preference would be to have a bit more room on > the left or the right (probably the left because I like the light over > there), but if what we see is pretty much full-frame, I'd crop a bit > off the right, just to avoid the bullseye effect we see here. > > As I said, however, the lack of sharpness is the big thing here; if > you could find the original neg and rescan it, you'd improve things > immensely! > > cheers, > frank -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
