Thoughts/critique:
#1 The pose is excellent.
#2 The chair color match is also good.
#3 And I like the directional light.  Too often "lots of soft light" takes away 
form the subject's character.
#4 The scarf works, but it might need moved just a little.  And it seems alone. 
 Perhaps a hat in her hand?
#5 But she is too close to the wall.
#6 The horizontal axis is odd.  Her position is fine, but photographer might 
move to the right further and then turn the chair to expose the back just a 
little more, placing her just a bit to the right side of the frame.  It will 
fill the image more.

She also looks like a great candidate for a close-up.

Sincerely, 

Collin Brendemuehl 
"He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose" 
-- Jim Elliott 






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