I think the light pole works in this picture. It fills some of the negative space in the sky and gives a counterpoint to the dress. Makes it look like it might be helping to light her (even though there is no rim light on that side). It would be nice if the pole were vertical though.
If I were going to crop it, I'd cut out most of the concrete wall on the left and crop close to the dress without clipping it out. The way she is standing, she's looking back into the frame, and you can imagine that she's waiting for her groom to come walking in from the right. On Fri, Dec 30, 2011 at 9:34 AM, David Savage <ozsav...@gmail.com> wrote: > You're right the lights don't add anything to the image, but I > included them in the scene for a reason. > > I actually prefer the shot as a square crop. > > Thanks for looking. > > Cheers, > > Dave > > > On 30 December 2011 13:08, <kwal...@peoplepc.com> wrote: >> Well done, but I find the lights in the URH corner distracting and not >> adding to the georgous image of the fair maiden ! A crop off the RH side >> about at the base of the stairs would quickly take care of it. >> >> Kenneth Waller >> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller >> >> ----- Original Message ----- From: "David Savage" <ozsav...@gmail.com> >> Subject: OT PESO - Bride >> >> >> >>> G'day All, >>> >>> Just for s#!ts & giggles: >>> >>> <http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7026/6592249649_ff6bdb5d3c_o.jpg> >>> >>> Critique away. >>> >>> Cheers, >>> >>> Dave >> >> >> >> -- >> PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List >> PDML@pdml.net >> http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net >> to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and >> follow the directions. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. -- David Parsons Photography http://www.davidparsonsphoto.com Aloha Photographer Photoblog http://alohaphotog.blogspot.com/ -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
