Thanks, Frank! The foreground face is already dodged about a half stop; I'll see how much more it can stand.
Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW ----- Original Message ----- From: "knarftheria...@gmail.com" <knarftheria...@gmail.com> To: ""Pentax-Discuss Mail List"" <pdml@pdml.net> Cc: Sent: Saturday, December 31, 2011 12:03 PM Subject: RE: PESO - Face Time I like this a lot but that dark face in the foreground is distracting to me. It may very that the couple in the doorway are the main subjects but if I could see more of his face I'd spend less time on him and get to the couple faster. Just a bit of a dodge would be helpful imho. Very well composed. Quite intriguing. Would love (despite the colourful graffiti) to see a bw rendering. Cheers, frank -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
