On Jul 25, 2012, at 5:11 PM, John Francis wrote: > > John, you've got to fix that excess verbiage. Let me go all Strunk & White on your writing.
> (Not to mention the fact that no punishment is too extreme for anyone > who conspires to inflict images of Justin Bieber on anyone who is > (a) male and (b) over the age of 13. That sentence should read: > No punishment is too extreme for anyone > who conspires to inflict images of Justin Bieber on anyone -- Larry Colen l...@red4est.com sent from i4est -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
