Hi David;

I like the basic feel. I would have cropped the image to eliminate the drop
off from the sand, which would have placed the woman closer to a rule of
thirds intersection. And maybe printed a little less cyan and a touch
lighter, though I don't know if the printing suggestions would alter the
feel too much.

BUTCH

"Each man had only one genuine vocation - to find the way to himself"
Hermann Hesse (Demian)
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