You nailed it, Bob.
You see, this is not the gazebo (if I understand correctly the meaning
of the term) - this is some kind of structure that is used by the
lifeguard on duty. So I couldn't really move my camera any more to the
left as the structure would have become too much prominent in the frame.
So yes, indeed, I was a bit struggling or more precisely - making the
best given the limits as my mind saw it at the time...
Thanks!
On 12/16/2012 12:18 PM, Bob W wrote:
Hi Boris,
the second one is the stronger of the 2. Both nicely composed and exposed,
but the second has a less cliched subject matter. The second one feels
slightly hemmed in by the frame, as if you've struggled a bit to squeeze it
in. I like the idea of the triangular composition, but it feels a bit
strained. Perhaps if you'd done without the lounger (?) on the right, and
given the gazebo a bit more breathing space it could have conveyed what I
think you were after (the light, the moon, the clouds etc.) slightly better.
Still a jolly good shot though.
B
-----Original Message-----
From: PDML [mailto:pdml-boun...@pdml.net] On Behalf Of Boris Liberman
Sent: 16 December 2012 04:46
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Subject: Two low light PESOs
Hi!
#54 -
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2012/11/peso-2012-54-flow-of-light.html
Tech stuff: Ricoh GXR, 50mm module
#57 - http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2012/12/peso-2012-57-night.html
Text stuff: K-5, DA* 16-50/2.8
Please be brutal and honest.
Boris
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