Thanks, Frank. I just wrote a message to Dave and Paul with my response,
where I mentioned you as well...
He's indeed standing just by the water, but it is very probable he's a
fisherman. I did not ask though :-).
It would seem at least from the responses this photograph gathered so
far, that a re-shoot may be in order.
On 5/17/2013 2:01 AM, knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:
I like the composition and love the shimmer off the water.
Two problems for me:
First of all he doesn't look like a fisherman. Whatever that
contraption is he's holding it doesn't look "fishy" to me. He looks
like a warehouse guy standing near the water.
Second, he's caught in some sort of silhouette netherworld. Barely
any detail in his face but enough that I want to strain to see his
features. That's a distraction to me.
I'd prefer either enough light to provide good details or a more
completely darkened silhouette.
So there you go, brutal and honest.
;-)
cheers, frank
--- Original Message ---
From: Boris Liberman <bori...@gmail.com> Sent: May 15, 2013 5/15/13
To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" <pdml@pdml.net> Subject: Boris PESO
#25 - Fisherman
Hi!
Please have a look and give me your b&h opinion...
http://pentax-ways.blogspot.co.il/2013/05/2013-25-fisherman.html
Thanks!
Boris
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