For me the main interest in this image is the tree and I would have tried to
arrange a composition from another vantage point to include some of the fall
color if possible.
Kenneth Waller
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/kennethwaller
----- Original Message -----
From: "Ciprian Dorin Craciun" <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO: Autumn-scapes :)
On Thu, Oct 17, 2013 at 11:15 PM, Ciprian Dorin Craciun
<[email protected]> wrote:
On Thu, Oct 17, 2013 at 10:12 PM, <[email protected]> wrote:
Other than the colors, I'm not sure what I should be looking at - ie I
don't see any compositional elements - line, shape, form etc
Unfortunately I agree about the lack of composition in my picture.
It's more a snapshot of the autumn colors while on the road, made
from the single vantage point I've had access to (although this
doesn't make a good excuse).
(In fact since I've got the K-30 this spring I've been
photographing mostly city-scapes and mid-day landscapes, thus the
first change I got to catch something more colorful I was itching to
put it out.)
Let's see if the other snapshot taken from the same vantage point
is better from a composition point of view.
http://data.volution.ro/ciprian/bdf753de58c560bc/44ff10a8138027c8/variant-a--x800.jpg
And the larger variant (~3.5 MiB)
http://data.volution.ro/ciprian/bdf753de58c560bc/44ff10a8138027c8/variant-a--x1080.jpg
Ciprian.
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