On 11/14/2013 02:44, Bob W wrote:
The overhead shot of the tables is nice - a hint of Kertesz, perhaps.
Maybe a b&w would look good.
MIght have to redo in more interesting light - I like the orange.
Ship, I can't see much in it.
I liked the geometry - agree it isnt a stand alone
Buildings very witty. Few people would have noticed that. Erwitt is one of them.
that's from the so-called High line - again - I can return to that spot
and make it stronger - the light wasnt so good.
Torn posters are a bit of a cliche, but not necessarily a bad one.
This one has too much white for my taste - it lacks balance.
A calendar of them could work, but would be difficult.
Each one would have to be very distinct,
or they'd just blur into each other and become repetitive.
B
Yeah quite right - and that's my trouble/challenge with it.. although
this particular one is pretty much my favorite of a few I've collected.
It's an experiment.
So how do you like Frankenthaler? Hans Hoffman? Frank Stella?
thanks for a good critique - sorry I'm not in actual street mode these days.
ann
On 14 Nov 2013, at 01:27, Ann Sanfedele <ann...@nyc.rr.com> wrote:
http://annsan.smugmug.com/On-the-Road-or-On-Foot/Very-recent-NYC/31835949_JqDbwJ/1/2899050339_C3wggXk/Large
http://annsan.smugmug.com/On-the-Road-or-On-Foot/Very-recent-NYC/31835949_JqDbwJ/1/2899053538_QSZCGk2/Large
http://annsan.smugmug.com/On-the-Road-or-On-Foot/Very-recent-NYC/31835949_JqDbwJ/1/2903462521_8cXfRDL/Large
http://annsan.smugmug.com/On-the-Road-or-On-Foot/Very-recent-NYC/31835949_JqDbwJ/1/2903463941_b8XHQcL/Large
These are in two different galleries on my home page - the one these
are in has 27 recent photos - if you feel like it - link to the whole gallery
index is - but you guys have seen most of the others before.
http://annsan.smugmug.com/On-the-Road-or-On-Foot/Very-recent-NYC/31835949_JqDbwJ
ann
annsan.smugmug.com
http://www.cafepress.com/annsanstuff
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