Thanks for having a look and especially the criticisms.
It is really interesting when you put two photos side by side. If they
are too similar, you think why am I seeing two when one will say just as
much. If you see two dissimilar photos you think what is the link
between the two, when there might not be. Its a fine line and a
distraction if not done well. So the singles layout gave things a bit of
tolerance. Good enough for Robert Frank and Walker Evans, good enough
for me. I might put in some discreet titling though.
Igor, you pointed out a few of those weaker shots. Made me think
On 28/11/2013 9:04 AM, Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote:
Nicely done photos, sir!
Like someone else intimated, it feels a little odd that you're using only one
page out of two facing pages. The blank space on the left sometimes becomes a
little overpowering—I want something to be there, even if it is just titling or
simple graphic.
G
On Nov 27, 2013, at 2:24 AM, Derby Chang <der...@iinet.net.au> wrote:
I made a Blurb. There are probably a few more adjustments before I order, but
this is essentially what it will look like.
http://members.iinet.net.au/~derbyc/13/11/eyecontact/index.html
Much regret missing the T&A discussion. I had some thoughts along that subject
while putting this together, and if some semi-cogent words form, I'll add my
farthings worth.
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