Thanks Larry, I think you are right about the cropped leaf which I only noticed during post processing :(
The light source is home-made; probably I should have spent more time to find&use the proper one (a soft box). And, in fact, my original was a horizontal :) I am happy that we are on similar tracks... Bulent --------------------------------------------------------------------- http://patoloji.gen.tr http://celasun.wordpress.com/ http://www.flickr.com/photos/bc_the_path/ http://photo.net/photodb/user?user_id=2226822 http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/artists/bulentcelasun 2015-02-04 23:09 GMT+02:00 Larry Colen <l...@red4est.com>: > > > Bulent Celasun wrote: >> >> A macro under artificial light (Ricoh GXR A12 module, 50mm f/2.5). >> >> https://celasun.wordpress.com/2015/02/04/adsiz/ >> >> While trying to construct a small home studio for better macros... > > > I love the composition (though it may be slightly improved if the leaf in > the lower left didn't have it's tip cropped off. > > I nearly love the lighting, but in some ways it seems just a bit flat, not > really showing texture in the leaves. > > All in all it's a wonderful shot, but it makes me feel like it could be > wonderfuller. Just for fun, try a horizontal crop, at 2x3, off the bottom, > so that you lose most of the leaves in the background that seem kind of dark > and flat. > > Larry > > >> >> Bulent >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> http://patoloji.gen.tr >> http://celasun.wordpress.com/ >> http://www.flickr.com/photos/bc_the_path/ >> http://photo.net/photodb/user?user_id=2226822 >> http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/artists/bulentcelasun >> > > -- > Larry Colen l...@red4est.com (postbox on min4est) > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
