Nicole,
I enjoyed looking at this series.
The first thought that popped up in my mind after looking at these photos
was the same as what I've written about your previous series from a dance
event: I enjoy the way you are framing these photos.
Having seen tons of dance-event photos, I think it is one of the
main things that make such photos interesting and powerful.
From that perspective, I'd say that lack of focus on the guy in
NAJ54780.jpg makes it not as strong. In a similar way,
having a deeper DOF in NAJ54762.jpg, so that the woman were also in
focus would be great, but I understand that you were shooting at f/1.4 due
to the low light. (And the guy's facial expression is not exactly
inspiring/-ed.)
Also, I am not sure if this photo is as interesting as the rest:
NAJ54533.jpg .
I think the rest of the photos are much stronger, so you might
consider just skipping these three.
PS. I thought you should've posted the masterpiece photo not at the
end of the other thread where some people might just skip it, but either
in this message, or yet separately!
I am talking about this one: https://flic.kr/p/HuH1up
Cheers!
Igor
Nicole Jacque Tue, 24 May 2016 23:47:43 -0700 wrote:
You’ve all seen Larry’s photos, here’s my version of BluesQuake:
https://flic.kr/s/aHskx7ZRij
I didn’t get to spend as much time editing as I’d like, unfortunately —
this is the crazy season at work before our big developers conference… I
did have a chance to play with my 360 degree camera on the dance floor
though. I haven’t had a chance to do anything with those yet. Hopefully
there’ll be something interesting there to share.
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