Paul, I checked out the Research web site. Looks quite good. But here are
some suggestion about the preamble/introduction.

The first line does not sound right. There is some composition problem here.
How about something like: The research is a Marxist journal that encourages
social analysis on the basis of Marxist theory. 

If you like you could add, centering on Marxist categories of mode of
production and class struggle, but I would suggest leaving it out. No need
to give a stark theoretical position in the very first line and narrowing
the audiance considerably.

Second line: It is International in ... empirical work(s). Your original has
work there. I think it should be works.

Next sentence is fine.

Next sentence: The Research is a refreed annual(journal)[I don't know
whether the word journal should be there or not], and is published in hard
cover by JAI press. It has been in regular print since 1977. It specializes
in publishing long and serious research papers up to 50 pages in print (on
occasion, even longer). On two previous occasions it has published special
volumes on particular topics with guest editors.

In the end, with the information for writers, you should also add
information for subscription and its price.

The reat looks fine. I guess it could be made more sexy, but I don't know
how. May be there should be more spaces (those hands, I mean) for going to
other places or going back to the original first page. But it's not a big deal.

Talk to you later. ajit

 
At 08:47 PM 11/13/96 -0800, you wrote:
>The R.P.E. Web site now includes tables of contents for all issues and
>more links to other relevant sites.  Further suggestions are welcome.
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>Thanks, Paul Z.
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