[EMAIL PROTECTED] (Jarkko Hietaniemi) writes:
> ==== //depot/perl/pod/perlfaq2.pod#54 (text) ====
> Index: perl/pod/perlfaq2.pod
> --- perl/pod/perlfaq2.pod.~1~ Mon Apr  8 13:00:05 2002
> +++ perl/pod/perlfaq2.pod     Mon Apr  8 13:00:05 2002
> @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
>  =head1 NAME
>  
> -perlfaq2 - Obtaining and Learning about Perl ($Revision: 1.9 $, $Date: 2002/03/09 
>21:01:13 $)
> +perlfaq2 - Obtaining and Learning about Perl ($Revision: 1.11 $, $Date: 2002/04/08 
>15:39:59 $)
>  
>  =head1 DESCRIPTION
>  
> @@ -185,8 +185,8 @@
>  
>  There is also a Usenet gateway to Perl mailing lists sponsored by perl.org at 
>  nntp://nntp.perl.org, or a web interface to the same lists at
> -http://nntp.perl.org/group/ .  Other groups are listed at 
> -http://lists.perl.org/
> +http://nntp.perl.org/group/.  Other groups are listed at 
> +http://lists.perl.org/ .

You (accidentally?) removed the space before the . after that first
URL...

> ==== //depot/perl/pod/perlfaq3.pod#63 (text) ====
> Index: perl/pod/perlfaq3.pod
> --- perl/pod/perlfaq3.pod.~1~ Mon Apr  8 13:00:05 2002
> +++ perl/pod/perlfaq3.pod     Mon Apr  8 13:00:05 2002
> @@ -191,7 +191,7 @@
>  
>  =item The Object System
>  
> -( http://www.castlelink.co.uk/object_system/ ) is a Perl web
> +(http://www.castlelink.co.uk/object_system/) is a Perl web
>  applications development IDE, apparently for any platform
>  that runs Perl.

Also here, whitespace was unnecessarily deleted.

> @@ -240,11 +240,11 @@
>  Only". You can also download text editors designed
>  specifically for programming, such as Textpad
>  ( http://www.textpad.com/ ) and UltraEdit
> -( http://www.ultraedit.com/ ), among others.
> +( http://www.ultraedit.com ), among others.
>  
>  If you are using MacOS, the same concerns apply.  MacPerl
>  (for Classic environments) comes with a simple editor.
> -Popular external editors are BBEdit ( http://www.bbedit.com/ )
> +Popular external editors are BBEdit ( http://www.bbedit.com )
>  or Alpha ( http://alpha.olm.net/ ). MacOS X users can use Unix
>  editors as well.

The / at the end of bbedit.com was unnecessarily deleted (without it,
an extra HTTP request is required).

> -with an embedded Perl interpreter--see http://www.cpan.org/src/misc/
> +with an embedded Perl interpreter--see http://www.cpan.org/src/misc .

I would add the / back, but keep the .

> @@ -655,7 +656,7 @@
>  http://perl.apache.org/
>  
>  With the FCGI module (from CPAN) and the mod_fastcgi
> -module ( available from http://www.fastcgi.com/ ) each of your Perl
> +module (available from http://www.fastcgi.com/) each of your Perl
>  programs becomes a permanent CGI daemon process.

Again, whitespace inside the parens.

--Bill.

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