Author: audreyt
Date: Thu Jul 27 10:38:08 2006
New Revision: 10490

Modified:
   doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod
   doc/trunk/design/syn/S06.pod

Log:
* S02, S06: gaal++ suggested s/sending a feed into/feeding into/.

Modified: doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod
==============================================================================
--- doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod        (original)
+++ doc/trunk/design/syn/S02.pod        Thu Jul 27 10:38:08 2006
@@ -572,7 +572,7 @@
 be a multidimension form of C<*> when that makes sense.
 
 The C<***> variant serves as the insertion point of a list of feeds.
-That insertion point may be targeted by sending a feed into C<*>.  See S06.
+That insertion point may be targeted by feeding into C<*>.  See S06.
 
 Other uses for C<*> will doubtless suggest themselves over time.  These
 can be given meaning via the MMD system, if not the compiler.  In general

Modified: doc/trunk/design/syn/S06.pod
==============================================================================
--- doc/trunk/design/syn/S06.pod        (original)
+++ doc/trunk/design/syn/S06.pod        Thu Jul 27 10:38:08 2006
@@ -872,8 +872,8 @@
     foo() ==> say ***, " is what I meant";
     bar() ==> ***.baz();
 
-Sending a feed into the C<*> "whatever" term is considered to extend
-the lexically following C<***> term:
+Feeding into the C<*> "whatever" term will extend the lexically
+following C<***> term:
 
     0..*       ==> *;
     'a'..*     ==> *;

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