James E Keenan wrote:
Klaas-Jan Stol wrote:
hi,
I've started a bit on a PIR tutorial on the wiki.
If anybody can spare a few moments, some feedback would be very welcome!
I am very glad to see this. One suggestion and one request for
clarification:
1. First bullet point in FAQ should be: What does PIR stand for?
Although you answer it two paragraphs below in the Introduction, this
deserves to be right at the top. Until today, I did not know what PIR
stood for -- and that was despite working on the project for four
months. So others are likely not to know the abbreviation's meaning,
either. (And while you're at it, you should state what 'PASM' stands
for as well.)
It's fixed. At this point I added references to some other files (I was
not aware of the docs in docs/art), to prevent duplication of efforts.
2. Under your "your first Parrot program" you say type this "assuming
you successfully compiled Parrot." My guess is that that means you
successfully completed 'make install' -- correct? If so, it would
probably be clearer to say "have successfully installed Parrot."
I think installing parrot is broken at this point (but I'm not sure).
Why should one have to install parrot before using it? It's well
possible to use it just having compiled Parrot, right?
HTH. Thank you very much.
kid51
thanks for the feedback,
kjs
