On Fri, Aug 21, 2020 at 07:42:35PM -0700, David G. Johnston wrote:
> On Fri, Aug 21, 2020 at 3:52 PM Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> wrote:
> 
> 
>     > Agreed, this doc area needs help.
> 
>     I developed the attached patach for this.  Is this sufficient?
> 
> 
> For consistency I would change "statement" to "command" at the end of that
> paragraph .
> 
>       the <xref linkend="sql-call"/> command.
> 
> and to contrast with "a part of" I would modify the following fragment to 
> read:
> 
>     a procedure is called in isolation
> 
> Taken together:
> 
> While a function is called as part of a query or DML command, a procedure is
> called in isolation using the <xref linked="sql-call"/> command.
> 
> And then swap the order of, and tweak, the transaction and isolation 
> sentences:
> 
> [...] the CALL command.  If the CALL command is not part of an explicit
> transaction a procedure can also manage multiple transactions during its
> execution.

OK, how is this updated patch?

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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml
index 6de464c654..1fdd98d41d 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/xfunc.sgml
@@ -84,8 +84,10 @@
     A procedure is a database object similar to a function.  The difference is
     that a procedure does not return a value, so there is no return type
     declaration.  While a function is called as part of a query or DML
-    command, a procedure is called explicitly using
-    the <xref linkend="sql-call"/> statement.
+    command, a procedure is called in isolation using
+    the <xref linkend="sql-call"/> command.  If the CALL command is not
+    part of an explicit transaction, a procedure can begin and commit
+    multiple transactions during its execution.
    </para>
 
    <para>

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