Hello everyone,
I noticed minor language inaccuracies/inconsistencies in PostgreSQL 14
Release Notes (https://www.postgresql.org/docs/14/release-14.html). A
patch to fix them is attached.
One of the replacements changes
"which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity" to
"to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity"
because "to report" is more consistent with the rest of the text (or
just add a comma before "which").
--
Elena Indrupskaya
Lead Technical Writer
Postgres Professional http://www.postgrespro.comtext.
<http://www.postgrespro.com>
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
index ecd074361c6..4f0437f87d9 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-14.sgml
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@ Author: Peter Geoghegan <p...@bowt.ie>
<para>
Reduce the default value of <xref
- linkend="guc-vacuum-cost-page-miss"/> to better reflects current
+ linkend="guc-vacuum-cost-page-miss"/> to better reflect current
hardware capabilities (Peter Geoghegan)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1441,7 +1441,7 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fu...@postgresql.org>
<para>
Add system view <link
linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-wal-view"><structname>pg_stat_wal</structname></link>
- which reports <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity (Masahiro Ikeda)
+ to report <acronym>WAL</acronym> activity (Masahiro Ikeda)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1936,7 +1936,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <mich...@paquier.xyz>
</para>
<para>
- Previously these functions could only be executed by super-users,
+ Previously these functions could only be executed by superusers,
and this is still the default.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2599,7 +2599,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us>
</para>
<para>
- Floating point data types already supported these.
+ Floating-point data types already supported these.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -2610,7 +2610,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <t...@sss.pgh.pa.us>
-->
<para>
- Improve the accuracy of floating point computations involving
+ Improve the accuracy of floating-point computations involving
infinity (Tom Lane)
</para>
</listitem>
