Here are review comments for v2-0002 ====== doc/src/sgml/logical-replication.sgml
1. I am not sure your convention to only give the link to the FIRST reference on a page is good in all case. Maybe that rule is OK for multiple references all in the same sub-section but when they are in different sub-sections (even on one page) I think it would be better to include the extra links. 1a. For example, Section 33.3 (Row Filter) refers to "publish_via_partition_root" lots of times across multiple subsections – So it is not convenient to have to scroll around looking in different sections for the topmost reference which has the link. 1b. Also in Section 33.3 (Row Filter), there are a couple of places you could link to "publish" parameter on this page. ~~~ 2. I thought was a missing link in 31.7.1 (Architecture/Initial Snapshot) which could've linked to the "publish" parameter. ------ Kind Regards, Peter Smith. Fujitsu Australia
