On Tue, Apr 2, 2024 at 9:24 AM Daniel Gustafsson <dan...@yesql.se> wrote:

> > On 2 Apr 2024, at 00:56, Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> wrote:
>
> > I ended up writing the attached doc patch.  I found that some or our
> > text was overly-wordy, causing the impact of what we were trying to say
> > to be lessened.  We might want to go farther than this patch, but I
> > think it is an improvement.
>
> Agreed, this is an good incremental improvement over what we have.
>
> > I also moved the <strong> text to the bottom of the section
>
> +1
>
> A few small comments:
>
> +considers performing minor upgrades to be less risky than continuing to
> +run superseded minor versions.</em>
>
> I think "superseded minor versions" could be unnecessarily complicated for
> non-native speakers, I consider myself fairly used to reading english but
> still
> had to spend a few extra (brain)cycles parsing the meaning of it in this
> context.
>
> + We recommend that users always run the latest minor release associated
>
> Or perhaps "current minor release" which is the term we use in the table
> below
> on the same page?
>


I do like the term "current"  better. It conveys (at least a bit) that we
really consider all the older ones to be, well, obsolete. The difference
"current vs obsolete" is stronger than "latest vs not quite latest".

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