>> Hello Bradley & Tatsuo-san, >> >>>> ... references to the protocol version lacks homogeneity. >>>> ... I'd suggest to keep "the vX.0 protocol" for a short version, >>>> and "the version X.0 protocol" for long ... >>> >>> I agree. Change made. >> >> Patch applies cleanly. Doc build ok. >> >> One part talks about "terminating line", the other of "termination >> line". I wonder whether one is better than the other? > > I am not a native English speaker so I maybe wrong... for me, current > usage of "terminating line", and "termination line" looks correct. The > former refers to concrete example thus uses "the", while the latter > refers to more general case thus uses "an". > > BTW, I think the patch should apply to master and REL_11_STABLE > branches at least. But should this be applied to other back branches > as well?
I have marked this as "ready for committer". Best regards, -- Tatsuo Ishii SRA OSS, Inc. Japan English: http://www.sraoss.co.jp/index_en.php Japanese:http://www.sraoss.co.jp
