Few comments on doc patches v36-008 and 009 combined:

1)
+       An array of JSON objects representing the local state for each
conflict attempt.

'each conflict attempt' looks misleading. We do not attempt to cause
conflicts; we attempt to apply, but it may result in conflicts.

Shall we rephrase to:
'An array of JSON objects representing the state of existing local
row(s) that caused the conflict.'

There could be multiple rows as well for multiple_unique_conflicts,
thus the 'row(s)'

2)
+   The <link 
linkend="sql-createsubscription-params-with-conflict-log-destination"><literal>conflict_log_destination</literal></link>
+   parameter automatically creates a dedicated conflict log table.

'conflict_log_destination' parameter does not create the table
automatically unless it is set to table. We shall clarify it.

The conflict_log_destination when set to table or all automatically
creates a dedicated conflict log table.

3)
+   Conflicts that occur during replication are, by default, logged as
plain text

When we say 'Conflicts' here, we shall make it a link to '29.8.
Conflicts' chapter. That way it will be more clear.

thanks
Shveta


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