On Tue, Mar 31, 2020 at 04:13:00PM +0200, Jürgen Purtz wrote: > Please find some minor suggestions in the attachment. They are based on > Corey's last patch 0001-glossary-v4.patch.
> @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ > Record</glossterm>s to the file system and creates a special > checkpoint record. This process is initiated when predefined > conditions are met, such as a specified amount of time has passed, or > - a certain volume of records have been collected. > + a certain volume of records has been collected. I think you're correct in that "volume" is singular. But I think "collected" is the wrong world. I suggested "written". > <para> > - One of the <acronym>ACID</acronym> properties. This means that > concurrently running > + One of the <acronym>ACID</acronym> properties. This means that > concurrently running These could maybe say "required" or "essential" >ACID< properties > <para> > + In reference to a <glossterm>Table</glossterm>: > A <glossterm>Table</glossterm> that can be queried directly, Maybe: "In reference to a >Relation<: A table which can be queried directly," > table in the collection. > </para> > <para> > - When referring to an <glossterm>Analytic</glossterm> > - <glossterm>Function</glossterm>: a partition is a definition > - that identifies which neighboring > + In reference to a <glossterm>Analytic Function</glossterm>: s/a/an/ > @@ -1333,7 +1334,8 @@ > <glossdef> > <para> > The condition of having no duplicate values in the same > - <glossterm>Relation</glossterm>. Often used in the concept of > + <glossterm>Column</glossterm> of a <glossterm>Relation</glossterm>. > + Often used in the concept of s/concept/context/, but I said that before, so maybe it was rejected. -- Justin