On Tue, Nov 17, 2020 at 6:13 AM Heikki Linnakangas <hlinn...@iki.fi> wrote:

> On 02/11/2020 18:02, David G. Johnston wrote:
> > diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/func.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/func.sgml
> > index bf6004f321..43bc2cf086 100644
> > --- a/doc/src/sgml/func.sgml
> > +++ b/doc/src/sgml/func.sgml
> > @@ -23892,7 +23892,8 @@ SELECT collation for ('foo' COLLATE "de_DE");
> >
> >     <para>
> >      The functions shown in <xref
> > -    linkend="functions-admin-signal-table"/> send control signals to
> > +    linkend="functions-admin-signal-table"/> send uni-directional
> > +    control signals to
> >      other server processes.  Use of these functions is restricted to
> >      superusers by default but access may be granted to others using
> >      <command>GRANT</command>, with noted exceptions.
>
> The "uni-directional" sounds a bit redundant, "send" implies that it's
> uni-directional I think.
>

Agreed, the other two changes sufficiently address the original complaint.

You can use the <link
> linkend="view-pg-file-settings">pg_file_settings</link> and <link
> linkend="view-pg-hba-file-rules">pg_hba_file_rules</link> views to check
> the configuration files for possible errors, before reloading.
>

I agree with adding "why" you want to check those links, and added a bit
about why doing so before reloading works, but the phrasing using "You"
seems out-of-place in this region of the documentation.

v3 attached

David J.

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