On 2/8/21 11:30 PM, e...@xs4all.nl wrote: >> On 02/08/2021 11:40 PM Jonathan S. Katz <jk...@postgresql.org> wrote: >> >> >> Hi, >> >> Attached is a draft of the release announcement for the upcoming >> 2021-02-11 cumulative update release. Please review for technical > > 'closes fixes' maybe better is: > 'includes fixes' or 'closes bugs' > > > 'also fixes over 80 bugs' > Maybe drop the 'also'; those same 80 bugs have just been mentioned.
Thanks for the suggestions. I have included them in the updated draft which I am posting to Noah's reply. Jonathan
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