2011/1/12 Robert Haas <robertmh...@gmail.com> > On Wed, Jan 12, 2011 at 11:53 AM, Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> wrote: > > The attached patch is a collection of libpq documentation cleanups > > recommended in a list of changes emailed to me by Leslie S Satenstein. > > > > Leslie found a number of places our libpq documentation that were unclear > > or awkward, and this diff generated by me attempts to address them. > > > > I have already updated the documentation proofreading wiki: > > > > http://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Documentation_Proofreading > > I don't think changing "see below" to "refer below" or "call" to > "execute" is an improvement; even if we did that uniformly throughout > our documentation, surely future editors are going to reuse those > phrasings. > > A lot of these other changes look pretty dubious too, although some > seem worthwhile. > I propose to change "backend server" to "backend" or "server. Robert, you mentioned that "backend server" phrase is suggest interchangeability of "backend" or "server" but there is no term "backend server".
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