On Thu, May 10, 2012 at 05:57:01AM -0700, Josh Kupershmidt wrote:
> On Wed, May 9, 2012 at 8:11 PM, Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us> wrote:
> > I have completed my draft of the 9.2 release notes, and committed it to
> > git. I am waiting for our development docs to build, but after 40
> > minutes, I am still waiting:
>
> This bit:
> Previously supplied years and year masks of less than four digits
> wrapped inconsistently.
>
> I first read as "Previously-supplied years..." instead of "Previously,
> years and year masks with...".
Good suggestion, I fixed that, and a few more, with the applied patch.
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+ It's impossible for everything to be true. +
commit 45f6fb2713feb21bc24fa907bad575008fd680ef
Author: Bruce Momjian <br...@momjian.us>
Date: Thu May 10 13:47:49 2012 -0400
Add comma after "Previously" as suggested by Josh Kupershmidt
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
new file mode 100644
index ed8ce99..fc477c8
*** a/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
--- b/doc/src/sgml/release-9.2.sgml
***************
*** 153,159 ****
</para>
<para>
! Previously supplied years and year masks of less than four digits
wrapped inconsistently.
</para>
</listitem>
--- 153,159 ----
</para>
<para>
! Previously, supplied years and year masks of less than four digits
wrapped inconsistently.
</para>
</listitem>
***************
*** 1010,1016 ****
</para>
<para>
! Previously such not-valid-for-session errors would cause all
setting changes to be ignored by that backend.
</para>
</listitem>
--- 1010,1016 ----
</para>
<para>
! Previously, such not-valid-for-session errors would cause all
setting changes to be ignored by that backend.
</para>
</listitem>
***************
*** 1165,1171 ****
</para>
<para>
! Previously the generic label <literal>?column?</> was used.
</para>
</listitem>
--- 1165,1171 ----
</para>
<para>
! Previously, the generic label <literal>?column?</> was used.
</para>
</listitem>
***************
*** 1852,1858 ****
</para>
<para>
! Previously default permissions generated <literal>NULL</> fields.
(WAS IT NULL?)
</para>
</listitem>
--- 1852,1858 ----
</para>
<para>
! Previously, default permissions generated <literal>NULL</> fields.
(WAS IT NULL?)
</para>
</listitem>
***************
*** 2389,2395 ****
</para>
<para>
! Previously libpq collected the entire query result into memory
before passing it back to the application.
</para>
</listitem>
--- 2389,2395 ----
</para>
<para>
! Previously, libpq collected the entire query result into memory
before passing it back to the application.
</para>
</listitem>
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