That last one is much better.  I really like the presentation of the
"newProcess" method.  Its a quick technical dive.  Perhaps the comment
needs to be tuned a wider audience,
describing how process creation is green-thread and and all managed by
Smalltalk code.  The warning about debugging this deep does't need to be
shown.  This is "marketing" after all.
it might also be good if the comment described what class "self" is
referring to, and what sending value to it does.
Change "Simulation guard" to "VM simulation guard primitive".  Also
breaking the code down to use a variable I think makes it clearer for an
outside to parse.
I wonder if the method text might something like be...

newProcess
"The receiver (self) of this message is a closure.
            Return a Process (green thread) to evaluate the value of
receiver's bytecode.
            The process is not scheduled."
<primitive: 19> "VM simulation guard primitive"
|executionContext|
executionContext := [self value. Processor terminateActive] asContext.
^ Process
forContext: executionContext
priority: Processor activePriority

In general its well laid out and not much room for anything else, but what
do you think about having a small Playground window with text  "SomeClass
allInstances inspect" and then the inspector overlapping it, for some
interesting SomeClass.


Try masking around the "newProcess" window on a separate layer so the whole
window is "brought forward".

The placement of the Time Profiler is really good.

Perhaps the title bar of "PetitParser Browser" can be renamed something
more broadly understandable, like "Grammar Browser" or "PetitParser Grammar
Browser".

Pull the Epicea window down so its title bar shows and displays something
understandable like "Change History"

The title text of "Inspector on a RTView" might be slide to the left on the
titlebar so that it shows in the less blurred part, but "RTView" is
meaningless outside our community
so maybe something like "Inspector on Data Chart"

cheers -ben



On Tue, Apr 25, 2017 at 5:48 AM, Pavel Krivanek <pavel.kriva...@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Right, next try...
>
> https://goo.gl/photos/YnGoZTrpKjJnSbFU9
>
> -- Pavel
>
>
>
> 2017-04-24 22:22 GMT+02:00 Cyril Ferlicot D. <cyril.ferli...@gmail.com>:
>
>> Le 24/04/2017 à 22:13, Pavel Krivanek a écrit :
>> > New version:
>> >
>> > https://goo.gl/photos/66Yz3pSSK62aTYV66
>> >
>> > -- Pavel
>> >
>>
>> Pretty nice but too blurry for me. Especially on the right of the screen.
>>
>> But maybe it's just me.
>>
>> --
>> Cyril Ferlicot
>> https://ferlicot.fr
>>
>> http://www.synectique.eu
>> 2 rue Jacques Prévert 01,
>> 59650 Villeneuve d'ascq France
>>
>>
>

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