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Op 1-5-2020 om 02:51 schreef Richard O'Keefe:
(oddSum + evenSum) dividedBy: 10

You previously had _ isDivisibleBy: 10
which certainly works.

Squeak, Pharo, and ST/X have #isDivisibleBy:
VisualWorks. Dolphin, and GNU Smalltalk do not.

Here's the code from Number.st in ST/X.
isDivisibleBy:aNumber
     "return true, if the receiver can be divided by the argument,
aNumber without a remainder.
      Notice, that the result is only worth trusting, if the receiver
is an integer."

     aNumber = 0 ifTrue: [^ false].
     aNumber isInteger ifFalse: [^ false].
     ^ (self \\ aNumber) = 0

The comment is wrong: the question makes sense for any combination
of exact numbers.
When, as in this case, aNumber is a literal integer, all
#isDivisibleBy: really adds is overhead.

(oddSum + evenSum) \\ 10 = 0

is quite clear, and completely portable.



On Fri, 1 May 2020 at 02:16, Roelof Wobben <r.wob...@home.nl> wrote:
Op 30-4-2020 om 16:06 schreef Richard O'Keefe:
This sounds very much like the Luhn test task at RosettaCode.
https://rosettacode.org/wiki/Luhn_test_of_credit_card_numbers
except that there it is described as working on the digits of an
integer.

(1) There are two approaches to traversing a sequence in reverse.
      (A) Reverse the sequence, then traverse the copy forward.
          aString reverse do: [:each | ...]
      (B) Just traverse the sequence in reverse
          aString reverseDo: [:each | ...]
      My taste is for the second.

(2) There are two approaches to deleting spaces.
      (A) Make a copy of the string without spaces.
          x := aString reject: [:each | each = Character space].
          x do: ...
      (B) Ignore spaces as you go:
          (i) aString do: [:each | each = Character space ifFalse: [...]]
          (ii) aString select: [:each | each ~= Character space] thenDo:
[:each | ...]

Combining (1A) and (2A) you get very obvious code:
      (aString reject: [:each | each = Character space]) reverse do:
[:digit } ...]
Combining (1B) and (2Bi) you get more efficient code:
      aString reverseDo: [:digit |
          digit = Character space ifFalse: [ ...]]

By the way, let's start by checking that the character in the string *are*
digits or spaces:
      (aString allSatisfy: [:each | each isDigit or: [each = Character s[ace]])
          ifFalse: [^false],

(3) There are two approaches to doubling the even digits.
      (A) Make a new string that starts as a copy and change every second
           digit from the right.
      (B) Simply *act* as if this has been done; keep track of whether the
          current digit position is even or odd and multiply by 1 or 2 as
          appropriate.
      nextIsOdd := true.
      aString reverseDo: [:digit |
          digit = Character space ifFalse: [
          nextIsOdd
              ifTrue:  [oddSum := ...]
              ifFalse: [evenSum := ...].
          nextIsOdd := nextIsOdd not]].

I *like* code that traverses a data structure exactly once and
allocates no intermediate garbage, so I'd be making (B) choices.


For me  , I use this to practice solving problems  and doing the "right"
steps.
So I love it , that so many people share there way of solving it.
I can learn a lot from it
Expecially when they explain there thinking process so detailed.

I like this code also a lot.
Am  I correct for testing if it is a valid string by doing this ^
(oddSum + evenSum) dividedBy: 10

Roelof



oke,

so this is better

cardNumber := '8273 1232 7352 0569'.
oddSum := 0.
evenSum := 0.
nextIsOdd := false.
     cardNumber reverseDo: [:character |
          digit := character digitValue.
         character = Character space ifFalse: [
         nextIsOdd
             ifFalse:  [oddSum := oddSum + digit ]
             ifTrue: [(digit >= 5 )
    ifTrue: [evenSum := evenSum + (digit * 2) - 9 ]
    ifFalse: [ evenSum := evenSum + (digit * 2) ]].
            nextIsOdd := nextIsOdd not]].
^ evenSum + oddSum // 10 == 0.


where I could even make a seperate method of the ifTrue branch when the digit is greater then 5.




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