jimw            Fri Jan 12 15:16:47 2001 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /phpdoc     global.ent 
    /phpdoc/en  preface.xml 
  Log:
  clean up language of preface, incorporate some user notes
  
Index: phpdoc/global.ent
diff -u phpdoc/global.ent:1.64 phpdoc/global.ent:1.65
--- phpdoc/global.ent:1.64      Wed Jan 10 13:11:15 2001
+++ phpdoc/global.ent   Fri Jan 12 15:16:47 2001
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <!-- -*- SGML -*-
 
- $Id: global.ent,v 1.64 2001/01/10 21:11:15 jimw Exp $
+ $Id: global.ent,v 1.65 2001/01/12 23:16:47 jimw Exp $
 
  Contains global "macros" for all the SGML documents.
 
@@ -86,6 +86,8 @@
 <!ENTITY url.php.faq "http://www.php.net/FAQ.php">
 <!ENTITY url.php.changelog "http://www.php.net/ChangeLog.php">
 <!ENTITY url.php.bugs "http://www.php.net/bugs.php">
+<!ENTITY url.php.cvs "http://cvs.php.net/">
+<!ENTITY url.php.docs "http://www.php.net/docs.php">
 <!ENTITY url.php.stats "../images/phpstats-200002.gif">
 <!ENTITY url.php.snaps.manual "http://snaps.php.net/manual/">
 <!ENTITY url.pgsql "http://www.postgresql.org/">
Index: phpdoc/en/preface.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.4 phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.5
--- phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.4   Sun Jul 30 11:32:22 2000
+++ phpdoc/en/preface.xml       Fri Jan 12 15:16:47 2001
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
    <simpara>
     <acronym>PHP</acronym>, which stands for &quot;PHP: Hypertext
     Preprocessor&quot;, is an HTML-embedded scripting language.  Much
-    of its syntax is borrowed from C, Java and Perl with a couple of
-    unique PHP-specific features thrown in.  The goal of the language
+    of its syntax is borrowed from C, Java and Perl with some
+    unique features thrown in.  The goal of the language
     is to allow web developers to write dynamically generated pages
     quickly.
    </simpara>
@@ -29,9 +29,21 @@
      PHP's documentation framework is maintained by &link.stig;.
    </para>
    <para>
+    You can download the manual in various languages and formats,
+    including <acronym>PDF</acronym>, plain text, plain
+    <acronym>HTML</acronym>, WinHelp, and <acronym>RTF</acronym>
+    from <ulink url="&url.php.docs;">&url.php.docs;</ulink>.
+   </para>
+   <para>
     Daily HTML snapshots of the manual, including translations, can be
     found at <ulink
     url="&url.php.snaps.manual;">&url.php.snaps.manual;</ulink>.
+   </para>
+   <para>
+    You can find more information about downloading the
+    <acronym>XML</acronym> source code of this documentation
+    at <ulink url="&url.php.cvs;">&url.php.cvs;</ulink>. The
+    documentation is stored in the <literal>phpweb</literal> module.
    </para>
   </sect1>
 


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