> >         This type of usage is ideal for scripts regularly
> > -       executed using cron (task scheduler on Windows),
> > -       or simple text processing tasks. See the section about
> > -       <link linkend="commandline">Command line usage
> > -       of PHP</link> for more information.
> > +       executed using cron (a task scheduler on Linux and Unix
> > +       systems) or a task scheduler on Windows.  These scripts
> > +       can also be used for simple text processing tasks. See the
> > +       section about <link linkend="commandline">Command line
> > +       usage of PHP</link> for more information.
>
> This still isn't really right, and is wordier than it need be. The
built-in task scheduler in most recent Windowses is called Task Scheduler
(!), so the original problem was really just one of missing capitalization.
I'd suggest a better solution would be:
>
>     "This type of usage is ideal for scripts which are executed
>      at scheduled intervals (e.g. using cron on Linux/Unix or Task
>      Scheduler on Windows), or simple text processing tasks. See the
>      section about ..."

Right, quite nice ;)

Goba


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